Anja Mayr
Jessica Pisano
Lang 120
7 April 2014
Reflection
Essay
When
I began working on my research paper I had a feeling of dread. I hated writing research papers! I have
always found that I write best when I am able to add my own opinion to the
piece of writing. It is also not much
fun to write about something that you have little connection with. I thought that this research paper would
elicit these feelings, even though I was interested in my topic. What I did not expect was that this to be
one of the most challenging papers I have ever had to write, but it was not
because I did not enjoy writing it, rather I cared about it so much that I
wrote multiple drafts and was constantly revising, editing, and thinking of
ways I could make this paper the best that it could be.
The
first step of the research paper is to inquire. I began my inquiry by trying to
find the best search term for my topic.
This seems like a simple task, but it ended up being much more difficult
then I had originally planned. I knew I
wanted my research paper to be something about why Girls On The Run is an
important program and how it positively affects young girls lives. From my experience with Girls On The Run I
knew there were many ways that is was beneficial, but what was the biggest most
important one that could be measured through an experiment? I finally landed on self-esteem. Self-esteem is one of the biggest effects
Girls On The Run had on these girls and it was fairly easy to measure and
physical activity is a big part of how Girls On The Run positively effects
these girls. I finally had a search term
that yielded many results, I used “self-esteem and physical activity and
children.” I found many sources, but a
lot of them were repetitive and some of them I was not able to access. I ended
up finding a the majority of my sources through the library database; it just
took a little digging. I found this step
of the research paper interesting and not too frustrating.
Applying
the research that I found, was by far the most challenging part of the research
paper process, I knew what idea I wanted to support and I knew the research I
found supported it, but I could not figuring how to format the information I
found into a paper. It took a lot of
planning and rewriting, but I finally found a style of organization that
worked. Applying all of my research was
a very tedious process and was the longest parts of the research paper writing
process for me and also the most frustrating.
I often had to cut different paragraphs and paste them in other places
to help the research paper flow. Making
the research paper flow was very challenging because I often ended up just
listing facts and did not connect it very well to the rest of the paper.
Reflecting
on the paper was very beneficial part of the writing process for me. After the peer review I ended up reviewing my
whole paper and finding things that my peer reviewer did not even mention, but
I found would be best to change. I really
benefit from a multiple step writing process. Something that really clicked for
me after my first revision was the conclusion.
I ended concluding with the “I feel…because…I would like you to…”
statement, which is now one of my favorite parts of the essay. After my wring
conference I revised my paper and found that I was so invested in the paper and
wanted to make it the best that I could make it, so I asked for another
revision, which really helped me see problems with some of my writing habits
that should be changed for this paper and in the future.
Usually
communicating my ideas is the hardest part of writing for me, but I felt in
this paper it was pretty easy to do. By
the end of the paper I felt I had successfully conveyed my thoughts and ideas
effectively. I think the format of the
research paper allows for an effective way to communicate ideas.
Overall
this was one of my favorite writing assignments I have completed. Though it was difficult and time consuming I
felt I learned a lot from writing and reflecting on this paper. I discovered some of my writing habits that I
need to break, but also gained some confidence in my writing in other
areas. I feel proud of my research paper
now. I put a great deal of effort into
it and I hope it shows through the paper.
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